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His Touch

I sit here missing my boyfriend

I remember how i feel when i'm with him

When i look in his eyes, my heart melts

Like milk chocolate in a microwave

When i hear his voice, I can't speak

As if my voice was stole

When i feel his touch, i feel dizzy

Like i just spun in circles

When i feel his warmth, i get sleepy

Like im wrapped up in a warm blanket and ready to sleep

When i taste his kiss, i feel like i am floating

Like how you feel when you get done jupming on a trampolean

When i am with him i just picture that one night

When we get to show eachother how we truly feel

His warm kisses

His warm hand on my face

His soft voice telling me he loves me

His eyes so warm and full of love

Now i just sit here and miss his touch.....

Ashley H.

 

 

 

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    March 26, 2008
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    I personally like the story behind this. If you can buff it up some some spots repetitive and clear some rough edges I think you would have an absolutely loveable piece here. Thank you so much for entering. please add your name to the author notes.
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