Pop Tarts
Silky smooth, choc so good
Similar colour of that to wood
Pop it in
The toast thing, thanks
Additional kilos to my shanks
Shiny filling, dripping out
Daft, crazy, folks all shout
How is it ok? How is it normal?
Pop tarts rank should be formal?
High up world’s admiration
Pop tarts! ought control nations.
Author notes
This makes no sense. Lol. Hardest thing I've EVER had to write..thanks for a challenge. Just so everyone knows, we were not allowed to use any word with "e" in it...
A contest entry
- No E's Please! by aaaaaaaa.
460 points, ended April 2, 2008, 13 entries
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It is indeed a challenge and you have risen to it beautifully. Pop tarts make no sense so hey why not...Nicelyh thought through and well constucted.
Good luck in the contest.
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Oh wow! What a challenging contest! Now way I could ever do this!! I'm impressed that you were able to pull this off!! And I love the randomness hahahah pop tarts!! Although I'm more of a toaster strudel myself. Well good luck in the contest... this was great!!!
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lol
good job, this poem makes me laugh, must have been difficult to write with no "E"s
The toast thing, thanks
Additional kilos to my shanks
this is great
I like pop tarts too
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haha this is great. Good job with it, I was cracking up when you called a toaster 'the toast thing' lol! GL in the contest.
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