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Rose Mary in the Garden

 

 

 

Mary, she rose from her knees
sandwiched between hot sun and soil,
struggling to breathe.

Wielding shears, she defined
the wild beauty of her climbing vines
but after hours of pruning unruly greenery
sometimes she ached,

as if she herself had been 
painfully reduced
to a more presentable shape.

A scented breeze resurrected a memory,
her mother’s words--

 


     rosemary thrives in the garden
     of a strong-willed woman

 

How well she knew the bend of its leaves,

its many names--
       ocean dew,
            compass weed--
and the irrigation of sweat it would take
to raise its fragrant stems
from buried seed.

 

But contrary to popular myth,

watering her rosemary plants
while wearing comfortable pants

was never part of a plan 

to gain advantage over her man.

 


     healing rosemary gives
     a woman of will the strength

 

 

Though they lacked the arresting

beauty and sharp defenses
of the velvet rose,

both woman and herb
were hardy enough to tolerate

droughts, waves of pests,

seasons without rest...

 


     it takes a strong-willed woman
     to tend the needs of her garden

 

 

From rugged toil, weeds, and oppressive air,

a cultivation created in posture of prayer,
Mary rose from her knees.

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Username: Mallig

Prompt poem:

http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/35088-Reginald-Arkell-Legend-of-Rosemary

"Legend of Rosemary" by Reginald Arkell

There was once a lady, divinely tall,
who lived high up in a castle wall,
and longed to be lord in her husband's hall.

A troubadour chanced to be passing by,
as the lady looked down from her casement high.
He stood at the foot of the castle wall,
and sang to the lady, divinely tall,
who longed to be lord in her husband's hall:

"A holy father, from over the sea
has brought me this cutting of Rosemary.
Plant it carefully by the wall.
If it grows a tree, both healthy and tall,
You shall be lord in your husbands hall."

The lady listened, and so it befell
she wore the doublet and hose as well.

And even today
There are cynics who say:
The wife who means to master her man
will trot down the path with her watering can—

And if you follow her, you will see
she always waters her Rosemary.

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 1
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    Masterpiece!

    Mallig, I was attracted to your poem as it is my name, and I have heard about my names meaning..Loving gardens and flowers as well. This write so well done with your pen is going to be bookmarked not only for the association of the poem to my name, but the skillful way you creatively through form and your mindful creativity have written this masterpiece..Worthy of the Gold for sure!


    • Mallig gold member
      September 1
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      Thank you so much for your visit and wonderful comment!

  • Polaja
    May 6

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    This is breathtaking! I really love the imagery and the way you interpreted the prompt poem the message of this poem is so well crafted and I just couldn't take my eyes from the screen thank you for the entry!

    Keep writing

    Polly


    • Mallig gold member
      May 6
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      Thank you so much for the wonderful comment and the honor of the gold, and also for the inspiration!
  • Mirthryl
    April 8

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    I absolutely love this! A gardener knows labor, persistence, prayer and pruning. Lots of time on one's knees to contemplate and create. Remarkable and ponder-worthy thought, of ourselves being "painfully reduced to a more presentable shape."
    Outstanding write, entirely beautiful! A level or two up from the prompt poem, in my opinion!

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