Plastic spoons
and little toy cups
tip onto the purple rug
casting silhouettes
of playtime you won't touch ~
not ever...
Author notes
Your word prompt is :
Land Of Shadows
In a list
A contest entry
- Word Prompt : Land Of Shadows - 20 Words by Kari.
425 points, ended March 27, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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These few lines is very powerful as it paints in simplicity .... Brilliant take on the prompt and very well constructed.
Congratulations on the Bronze.
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Wow..this one is deep and really goes " outside of the box " with thinking..wonderful job here. Thanks for yoru entry
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I like! this is really good and full of imagery! Great job!
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this hits home in way that stirs a pain i try to bury daily but you have captured the story a lot of women know and i thank you for your thoughts
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this is such a heart wrenching piece and in few words you have caught so much emotion just wow well done ummy
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oh my word!
this is heart wrenching!
no one will leave this poem unscathed...
very creative and stirring...
this is begging for tin!
Blessings! Tammy
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Dark interpretation of the prompt, sounds deadly. Liked the reference to silhouettes in this poem. Interesting title...
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Ominous and intriguing, great take on the prompt. Good luck.
♥
whisper
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