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La Lavande

Like Van Gogh
I discovered that the lilac
whispers of lavender
is needed to soften
the yelling yellow Light

But also that the transposed Sun
could dry the purple tears
of loneliness and fears

I framed mư painting
with my eyes
and exhibited it
in the Gallery
of the Heart

but unlike Van Gogh
I could always hear
with my inner ear

and my bedroom
remains white  
and is not at Arles
...

myra

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Written February 11th, 2002

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  • myrataal silver member
    February 14, 2002
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    Thank you, Toad ... I hope you have still 2 ears ...LOL

  • Toad
    February 11, 2002
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    I really like Van Gogh. I could see - in your words - it's likeness. Pretty cool.


  • myrataal silver member
    February 11, 2002
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    Thank you for your kindness and compassion ...

  • aiwaz
    February 11, 2002
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    yes of course it belongs to all who dream yr dreams thnx


  • myrataal silver member
    February 11, 2002
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    ooooooooh, aiwaz! do you not know that my talent is not mine?

  • aiwaz
    February 11, 2002
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    one day very soon when my powers are worthy i will write you an epic that makes you feel as beautiful as this...mistress, i am not worthy

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