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YaYa

Your tongue is incredible; your lips-bliss
wonderful, punctuated silence
mystical whispers in the dark
this is no fantasy; no lark
in the heat of the battle; sans fence
edible sensations, I need your kiss.

How you linger in the core of my mind
without question you are one of a kind
can one settle for any less than this?
that would be 'unnatural' pure nonsense
you have left me with your essence; your mark.

Dancing on the ripples; roaming you
makes me utter words out of the blue
your eyes I just can't seem to resist
your wild loving is just too immense!

Let's jet off into our fav' park
I need more of you; less of Marc
are you ready? then let's embark.




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  • FaerieNWonderland
    November 7, 2008
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    very nice piece i really love it


  • individuality gold member
    March 27, 2008

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    a fine piece of poetry that weaves the smiles and laughter of love into the versaic form then dances into joy's fast paced lanes - a good poem


  • Abson
    March 26, 2008

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    SUPERIOR..

    This is a powerfully worded piece of romantic poem that says it all.This is an exquisite piece that is superior in every sphere.

  • goalsv
    March 26, 2008

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    Sounds like teenagers in love! LOL A vewry well done poem, not really up to date on Versaic, yet I did enjoy it.


    • 2lullabyhaven
      March 26, 2008
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      Smile...doesn't love turn us all into 'teenagers'? hahaha thanks...

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