Surrounding, simple emotions that are obliviouS
Around your being - like an aromA,
Tingling on your inside, buT
Intensively nerving. I
Sink into your pleasureS,
Finding the truth within - only iF
You allow me in, with all your abilitY.
Author notes
..::actually, a friend of mine showed me that she was doing this contest during school and I wanted to give it a try. first time, so it might be a little 'rocky'::..
Enjoy!
A contest entry
- Mirror Acrostics by LanguishedLad.
950 points, ended April 23, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
chyeah! tell me what you think...
Comments
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Ahhh... what a lovely feeling of sensuality in this!
Like what you've done here.
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i think this worked out fine, im not sure if they can flow into the next line i was working on those but i wasnt sure, i think that you did a great job and its a nice word to work with, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy
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oh wow, doesn't seem like u had a hard time with this. u did an awesome job. awesome awesome. me thinks urs is better than mine.....and im hungry. lolz
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