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I Don't Know If I should

I don't know if i should tell you

I don't know how you will reply

I don't know if you feel the same

I don't know if it will ever be

 

All I know is how I feel

All I know is what people are telling me

All I know is that I have a crush

All I know is I'm going crazy over this

 

If I do tell you

If you do reply

If you do feel the same

If it will ever be

 

I just can't do it

I am just to scared

I can't go threw that

I just can't I just can't

 

After all this time

After all these weeks

After a couple of months

After everything I don't know

 

Why am I doing this to myself

Why can't I get you off my mind

Why are you always in my thoughts

Why won't you just leave me alone

 

I promised myself I wouldn't do this

I promised I would be smarter

I promised that I would not hurt myself

I promised I would stop

Author notes

Ok so I have a few thoughts on my mind about someone and I want to get them off but I can't maybe I need some serious help

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  • Candyknife
    March 26, 2008

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    hmm

    interesting
    the flow was nice but it was much like prose
    and a bit ranty
    repetitiveness was a bit much
    i like the passion in it though


  • Patpowers
    March 26, 2008
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    Good one! The expressions and the emotions show where you are coming from. THANKS!!


  • oldschooldee1
    March 26, 2008
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    cool write been there... way to let it out, very good poem liked very much...