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Raindrops Gifts

              Glistening raindrops giving spider webs abound,
                  Such a beautiful gracing look of awe to behold.

              Feeling of raindrops touching one's face softly,
                  Giving off a freshness to life's renewed spirit.

              Falling raindrops dancing upon all the roof tops,
                  Sharing a lovely sound of music to one's hearing.

              Gathering raindrops spreading themselves to create,
                  Rivers of water to everything that is alive here.

              Frozen raindrops forming a beautiful falling snow,
                  Dusting the ground gently with a white covering.

              Sunny raindrops creating nature's amazing tricks,
                  Spreading awesome colors in the form of rainbows.

              Smelling raindrops as they first drop on the soil,
                  Turning the earth's dirt into a pleasant aroma.

              Enjoying raindrops forever till the day I pass,
                  Never doubting the power of nature's great creation.

             

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  • calendar girl
    April 19, 2008
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    this made me smile

  • almostgone
    March 28, 2008
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    Beautiful imagery. Your words entice have enticed the senses.

    I loved the line:

    Smelling raindrops as they first drop on the soil,
    Turning the earth's dirt into a pleasant aroma.

    It reminds me of the smell of pavement after a rainstorm. Best of luck!