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Falling

Lost…
behind your blue sky eyes,
into the vastness of you;
now stretches into forever,
falling beyond your event horizon…

A contest entry

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  • Perfectly Imperfect
    March 28, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful expression. It made me smile. It's something I can relate to feeling I love the imagery. Well done and thank you for entering x


  • BellaD
    March 26, 2008

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    I love the "blue sky eyes, into the vastness of you" these words conjure a beautiful image and joyful feeling-- perhaps of floating. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.