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I dunno

These tears wont stop falling,
Although I can't tell you why.
I should be so happy,
But I just want to die.

I'm just so stressed,
And I can't let it out.
Don't think I'm a stupid emo kid,
That's not what I'm about.

I'm having a baby,
I'm living my life!
I'm getting a house,
I'm gonna be his wife!

But still the tears keep falling,
Life's getting me so down.
I'm pathetic, there's no reason,
Except I'm tired of living a lie.

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Not written in a while. So cliche and crap, but it's true.

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  • bigXfatXemo
    March 27, 2008

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    Aww bless you love! It's pretty normal to feel high and low during pregnancy, especially when you've been through all sorts before hand. It can bring up a lot of feelings.

    Back to your write, I like the simplicity of this poem though and the contrast of feelings, so bravo

    Talk to me anytime you like, please don't hesitate. I've not been in your situation but I am a good listener still

    xXx


    • NicotineHeartbreak
      March 29, 2008
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      Thanks sweetie, I like having someone to talk to when I'm down, it's great knowing I have good friends like you.

      Ly chick

      x x


  • XXMetalHeadNoni13Xx
    March 27, 2008

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    Wow I loved this poem!! please dont stop writing!! you have a talent for poetry, so use it!! i enjoyed reading it.


    • NicotineHeartbreak
      March 29, 2008
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      Thank you or taking the time to read my poem, it means alot to me. Glad you like it.

      LY

      x x