Shredding
the petals,
tossing
them to the sky
I try to unravel the meaning.
The fibers are disentangled,
leaving
nothing
Author notes
20 words.
What is the meaning of life? After you remove all the superficial things in your life and try to look at what actually makes life worth it, is anything left to give any of it meaning?
A contest entry
- 20 Words by Perfectly Imperfect.
450 points, ended March 30, 2008, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Thoughts?
Comments
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This is one of my favourites. I love what you have expressed, your words are so true. I really like the imagery
Well done and thank you very much for entering x
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