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Alice In Wonderland

In a world of my own
All the flowers
Would sit and talk to me for hours
Would sing a song only i could understand
I keep wishing it would be that way
Cause then my world would be a wonderland.

Off with their heads!
Is what she screamed so loud, so clear
For everyone and all to hear
Alice, Alice?
Get that out of your hand
Alice, Alice?
Do you not understand?

Your dress is stained
With the darkest shade of red
Your smile, that of a child
Off with her head!
Your eyes are wild
And are scary to behold
Your mind a fortress
Your diary a story to be told.

Wake up, stop sleeping!
Your life is on the line
Alice, your dreaming!
Your memory forever confined
Your going to be late
For a very important date
No time to say hello
Goodbye!
Your late, your late....

Your too late.




Author notes

Fairy! Erm....how to explain! Its obviously Alice in Wonderland, but she kills herself....i dont know, read between the lines, if no one gets it just message me

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  • BeautifulNightmare
    April 5, 2008

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    This Is Fucking Awesome. I Havent Been On Here In Too Long and I Have Missed Reading Your Stuff.
    Keeeeep Writting.

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  • Princess Peaches
    March 27, 2008
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    Wikked! and good luck in the contest!


  • peridotPixi
    March 26, 2008
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    i like your take on arlice in wonderland, i guess its kinda true like that because our world is deffinitly not a wonderland and it seems to me that more and more people would like to behead others this day and age, good luck in our contest and keep writing, -Amy