Nobody knows about me
about what I am.
They know who I am
yes of course
who couldn't.
But nobody knows
what I am.
Well what am I?
I'm not even sure I know;
and I'm pretty sure I should.
So you see
nobody knows.
I'm not normal
that much is true.
I wonder what I am.
So you see nobody knows;
but neither do they care.
Author notes
I'm not going to try to explain this one... nah not gunna contemplate doing so.
Prompt:- Nobody knows.
...someone shoot me please? ;P
A contest entry
- 25 Titles by xxRainbowDawnxx.
350 points, ended April 3, 2008, 17 entries
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Simple but very expressive. I think that we all can relate to people really not seeing the true us and not trying to, either. Nicely done.
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Thanks. I'm glad you think so. It's a pain how people just accept things at face value.
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no shooting you and you are amazing and boy are you in trouble tomorrow when I see you hehe.well done faye faye
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...no I'm not amazing and I didn't get into trouble yay!!!
Well if you wont shoot me ...then lock me up?
Thankies!!!
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no
cuZ your gorguse
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hehe thanks but I think my brain's trying to kill me!!! *fends of evil brain*
....man I'm loopy aren't I.
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