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le peine (english version)

the pain unbarable
death insane
red in vision
life in shock

black rain falls
and life collapses
now and again
lightining spurts

death lives
and my soul dries
to a once open cherry

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i know it's weird and makes kno sense but feel free to insault me if you want =)

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  • Panda-Bear09
    March 26, 2008
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    Wonderfully written. Super dark and spooky with a lot of imagery. keep it up!