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Insanity

Judging your chromatic touch

Snapping my body into folds

Lips failing to touch truth

Dying dramatically in static

Inch by inch, burn-slash rapid

Carvings digging, my position

twisting marks that stain drops

Jilt anticipation into comparison

Ridiculous ambition lying cold

Haunting foundations fracturing

X-signings on autographs wasting

Drowning in sorrow - mind damaging

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No e's, I hope.

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  • annamoy
    April 2, 2008
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    Well done on getting silver.


  • warm winter tears
    March 31, 2008
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    intence

    thi smakes tones of sence


  • Angelflower
    March 29, 2008

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    OH my..lol.. this was really good for not using any E's lol.. I am amazed.. Great write..
    Peace to you, jetleena


  • ultimate beluga
    March 27, 2008

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    damn how did you write such a great piece with no e's?! thats amazing, very well-crafted and clever. great work!

  • aaaaaaaa
    March 26, 2008
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    This is great, a good use of words!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 26, 2008

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    o0o0 this is a very clever right and i absoltuly love how you have written this. a very clever piece twinny

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