I'll give it all
As I walk down the line
Trying to keep balance
On a wire so fine
I'll make it to the other side
But it's less and less about the end
As much as enjoying the ride
So I'll walk on tip-toes
So the eggshells won't crack
But I'll keep moving forward
Since I could never go back
Author notes
Only look forward because if you keep looking back on yesterday you'll never see where you end up tomorrow...
Comments
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Short, sweet, and to the point. The title reamins true to the message. Great Job.
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Welcome to AP. You have been very busy reading, writing, commenting since you joined. Hope you find time to enter some contests and take some classes from the great poet instructors on site. Check Learn at the top to see what is being offered. Liked the poem you wrote here. The future becomes the presents becomes the past so quickly. We need to live each day to the fullest and learn from our mistakes.


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Yer pretty wise for ya age it seems, in swedish u'd be called "snusförnuftig". yep <.<
a nice lil' poem too! ^^ -
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Thank You so much! ^_^ sorry I took so long to reply! But I really do appreciate it! Thanks for the compliment! ^_^ !!
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