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Devil

Our souls will intertwine no more
When words lie bleeding on the floor
A blackened tongue, doused in sin
Corroding subtle virgin skin
In his ruthless wake, my body burns
Each kiss becomes a scar in turn
On hidden thorns, my heart's impaled
Like Christ upon the cross, its nailed
To the master of such cunning lies
Who seduced the whore with vodka eyes
His raw orgasm in her hellish bed
Will cut at last my mortal thread

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For anyone whos ever been cheated on

I hope this doesnt offend any Christians, its not meant to be blasphemous

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  • grannyeri gold member
    March 26, 2008

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    Good flow, rhythm and rhyme in these lines. Very deep, dark and filled with images of the devil and his deeds.