A storm is forming in my mind
Another moment I can't find
Repetition blurring this
Another target I try to miss
Flashbacks of times we tend to pass
Moments framed, and lacking class
I see it clearly, just a piece
Of moments that have come to cease
Now I crash, and shatter here
Salvation something not so near
I wonder where the pieces fall
I wonder if I'll find the call
I lay broken here for many days
Silently feeling my decay
But hope arrives, but just in time
Saving me from the reaper's chime
You pull me back together now
Your reasons hidden from me, somehow
You stopped a clock that never ceases
You gather up these broken pieces
Author notes
About myself, and someone I know.
A contest entry
- My 50th contest for rhyming poems... 20 poets, 790 points by Manoj Sanyal.
700 points, ended March 27, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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oops.. i meant to appluad this and well... i forgot... so yeah... anyway... here you go...
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I really like this... I think it's one of my favorites by you!!! Keep up the great work...
[i.love.you.and.miss.you]
*Amber* -
very well expressed... sad and emotional.
Best wishes and good luck
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Thanks for the honorable mention.
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I like this. Very good write.
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