Starlight,
the only light we need
as we cast away the careless
and crass light of day.
For here in my starlit realm,
where I alone am king.
Here is where I bask in joy.
For here is the only place,
She and I may be together.
This starlight path,
Has been given to me by God.
A path to lead me into his embrace.
A path to grant me eternal love,
and to allow me to see her again.
I redeem my self through starlight,
by following my ordained path.
My path lit by starlight,
that leads,
through, from, and to
starlit darkness.
Author notes
This is a musing on starlight and an explanation of my signature saying, May the stars always light your path.
I hope you like it.
A contest entry
- Let's Think About Light by The Poetic Bandits.
900 points, ended April 23, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hope you like it pls use constructive critism
Comments
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Bravo!
Congratulations on your Silver trophy! Well Done!
I offered a challenge to All Bandits to enter this contedt and I further stated that I would give 50 points to all that placed ahead of me, That mean you will shortly recieve 50 points from me and my sincere thanks for participating in this Bandit activity.
Bandits Rock!
Dennis
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Your signature is nice, you obviously love the stars, and I agree there is magic up there above our heads, it surely affects the way we think, especially when in love...only a poet can portay this perfectly, in the way you have done here
A rich write, full of imagery which swirls around the reader...a pleasure to read
~Lilac
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This is a wonderful poem on starlight I really like the softness of your words and the wistful tone that you have portrayed so well beautiful poem my friend - I wish you the best in the contest!
Keep writing
Polly
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So many different things one can write about starlight; liked the sentiments you expressed here - easy to read and understaand.
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This is very beautiful.
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