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Palette Season

The season when all things come to an end

where winter thaws all that nips its pose,

sung to blue jays, a spring melancholy send.

There a whisper; leaf upon branch, now composed,

all of madness now coming, seize within reason,

Where rouge melt her tears a palette season.

 

Nurture all that was of a snowy season,

as far as the hilltop and the wild flowers end,

She saw the butterfly pollinate love of reason,

As the wind, dressed a leaf branch, a stature pose.

dressing behind lilacs lace, an apron daisy-composed.

and melodies whisk on the wind, a pollination send.

 

A mother’s love song with lyrics as she send,

as the ice pond melt, a warm breeze now season

from the seed ground, and nurturing composed,

each little bud spun its palette, canvas end.

Where ones beginning on the tipped, posed,

walked the valley and drank its breath reason,

 

milked its pollination from all of sun’s reason,

and give the bumble bee its humming as she sends

the ides of March to April showers a growth in pose,

from the depths of winters frozen complexities season

nurturing in kaleidoscope vision that a mother ends.

On canvas, its painting mused all composed,

 

All buds posed on tip of the soiled drank a reason,

from the mountain's and the valley composed a melody send,

on canvas a hue that palettes end with showers, that nurture season.

 

 
 
 
 
 
 

 

 
 
 

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 5, 2008
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    Rich imagery and imagination! Obvious why you won an honorable mention!

    All buds posed on tip of the soiled drank a reason,
    from the mountain's and the valley composed a melody send,
    on canvas a hue that palettes end with showers, that nurture season.

    Wonderful!

  • crazymomma
    August 10, 2008
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    Amazing and vivid imagery in this write. I felt sad in knowing summer is close to over as I read. This is lovely. Thanks for entering and good luck.

  • LadyDementia gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    Congrats on the HM!

    Wonderful imagery, a fantastic poem. You surrounded me in nature while I read, summers beauty, you have portrayed it very well. Congrats on the HM

    P.S sorry about the group, it was only ever created to do the challenge.

    • saddie23 gold member
      June 14, 2008
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      thank u

      Thank u for the wonderful comments given to my poem. Theres no group, sorry to hear that I was looking forward to joining another fun group. Let me know when u will be starting a group. Saddie23

  • frownsnfreckles
    June 13, 2008

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    'She saw the butterfly pollinate love of reason,

    As the wind, dressed a leaf branch, a stature pose.'

    I'm not generally a great lover of classic form poetry, it often sounds cliched and originality is given up in favour of rhyme. This however is original and fresh, the verses flow with confidence and freedom of expression. There are layers of depth and meaning within the imagery, which in itself is well created. Personally I think you should have got the gold. Excellent and enjoyable write.

    • saddie23 gold member
      June 13, 2008
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      Thank u

      thank u for the wonderful comments given to my poem. This poem was longer than I had imagine. I tried to give it depth of spring day. I like the applaudes too. Saddie23

  • Manoj Sanyal
    March 26, 2008
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    lovely poem.
    Thank you for participation.
    Best wishes and good luck
    • saddie23 gold member
      March 27, 2008
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      thank u

      thank u for the wonderful comments and for the honorable trophy too. Saddie23

  • Amalie
    March 26, 2008

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    Wow... I can see a wildflower meadow with little kids running through it playing tag when I read this...It's descriptive and takes you on a journey... Good job!
    • saddie23 gold member
      March 26, 2008

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      thank u

      Thank u for the wonderful sentiments given to my poem. I wanted the viewer to appreciate Spring more closely than they ever before. Saddie23
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