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not like this

it's not supposed to be like this,
When you tell me things like that,
I'm not supposed to care,
At least I think not,

It doesn't make sense,
When the tears come to my eyes,
I don't want this to be,
But is it really my decision,

I wish I didn't care,
Then it wouldn't be so difficult,
To go about my business,
And not think of this,

I want someone to make this of sense,
But I'm not sure if I should talk about it,
It's pratically not my business,
Though I've been told many times before,

It's not supposed to be like this,
In any way,
I wish this hadn't happened,
Then again...

Do I???

Please tell me what you think

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  • xRigoRxMortiSx
    March 29, 2008
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    hmm....

    this is very confuseing but do you?...


  • tjj
    March 27, 2008
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    hu lost kinda


    • Rize
      March 28, 2008
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      yeah...it makes sumwhat sense, but you don't know what the problem really is and why it's not supposed to be that way....it's crazy...but if you want to know i will tell you seperately..


      • no-way-ap
        April 5, 2008
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        great.

        i think i might have the same problem. will you tell me?


        • Rize
          April 13, 2008
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          sure...but just to get this straight...you want to know my problem??? am i right???


  • Eaven
    March 27, 2008
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    I dont know the problem, but i see your solution


    • Rize
      March 27, 2008
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      the peoblem is kind of an under based situation at the moment that i'm not ready to surface for everyone to see....i wish i could now and take the risk, but i just can't...


  • Dirty and Broken
    March 26, 2008

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    i don't understand, but, then again, maybe i'm trying to read too far into it
    it's a good poem, i like it, though


    • Rize
      March 27, 2008
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      tell me how you are reading too far into it...what exactly are you getting from it...thank you for your comment though...much appreciated..


  • Neha Kaushik
    March 26, 2008

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    I liked this.. so simple words yet so powerful and sad.. it hurts when the person you care about the most acts nonchalantly and wants you to be one.. loved reading it.. thanx for sharing..


    • Rize
      March 26, 2008
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      thank you for your comment...i wasn't finished, but i guess that's when the work is the best....again thank you for your comment though...much appreciated...

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