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Perfect Pitch [silver]

The purity
of your voice
echoes
within my heart


Perfect pitch sends
chills
down my spine

Leaves me
wanting
more...



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  • jcat gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    Well I would like to think that is how Steven views me but we both know that would be a lie since he keeps asking me if i can have voice surgery since mine annoys him endlessly Well doen and most derserving of the shiney!!!


  • Mallig gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    Concise, perfect emotion... Sound and sensation, so beautifully paired here. Congratulations on the silver cup!


  • Perfectly Imperfect
    March 28, 2008

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    I love this. It's beautiful. You have captured so much in merely twenty words. This made me smile as it's something I can relate to feeling a lot Well done and thank you for entering x


  • Amera gold member
    March 27, 2008

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    Ooooo! I love this my friend. I do know that it's not about me; if you ever heard me sing, it's far from perfect pitch.

    Love,
    Amera


  • Neha Kaushik
    March 26, 2008

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    Wow!! This is just beautiful.. an excellent take on the prompt.. very true indeed.. no matter people we love are near to us or not.. we could still feel their presence, their fragrance, can hear their voice which broadens the void inside us.. loved reading it.. thanx for sharing...

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