Significance in the way you kisS.
Incentives overcome you and I.
Gently destroying doubt still lingerinG.
Nudging my steel gates opeN.
Invading my castle at its weakest point, I
Find you are the savior I’ve forever dreamt oF.
Intensity of a tsunamI.
Changing my façade from acidiC.
Again to my true self by freeing me of my phobiA.
Nothing can ever touch this perfectioN.
Continuously proving your enthusiastiC…
Ever lasting unconditional true lovE
Author notes
i didn't mean for it to sound sexual in the beginning- i tried to drive it away from that sound. it's supossed to be about love no making love. lolz...that was interesting, i've never tried a mirror acrostic before
A contest entry
- Mirror Acrostics by LanguishedLad.
950 points, ended April 23, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This does have a great sensuality about it, but holds more than just that. It speaks of love also.
Great write.
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i really like how you came up with a word that ended with I, i had a really hard time with that letter, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy
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wow! being your first time, you did an excellent job!!! seriously... Imma try. ~hehe~ probably wont be as well written as yours though... good luck chika!!
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