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The Top Of The World.[am i free here]

Adorable smile and shining eyes
Maybe all she was good for is to be surprised
Short skirts and wasted dreams
All the years she though she had wings
Whiskey breath and dilated eyes
She’s so fucking glamour’s to everyone’s surprise!
Glitter and glam she’s is good as new
Fake and wasted she is a glamour’s model
That no one will know of, she is a falling star
She fell so hard and fast you couldn’t even see
She is happy and loved she is trapped and confused
Never sober never clean fell in love lost in the dark
Watch her heart slowly part; broken and glued
Stable yet bruised, the alcohol has nothing on
The drugs she took this morning the weed is just her
Get away her love and now her life watch  her
She’s glamour watch her she falls perfect and fake
She makes many mistake, glitter and bruised
Yes this girl uses, needles and veins its all a fast game
Cigarettes are candy there good for a while but never stay long
Menthol and smoothes watch her she will soon lose.
Meting new people getting new friends being doped up is the new trend
Did you not here well its ok just come over here
From morning to three a.m we will take this world on a spin
Games and giggles fights and talks running away
Just being free man I love my life but at the same time “is it me”.

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 1, 2008
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    -HUGS-

    Have been thinking about you much daughter dear.
    It's always nice to read your words, and know how you are.
    Just take care, and never take one moment over your whole future.
    Ya know I have to be the Dad, that's my job!
    Much love sweet soul! Peace~


    -Timothy aka poeticweaver


  • DestiniesTwined
    March 26, 2008

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    This is a beautiful poem. I worried about you love. At least this tells me how you're doing. I'm honestly and truly concerned. I don't mean to annoy you with my worries, but I care about you.


    • oldphotosonlybringt
      March 26, 2008
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      Aw darling thaNKS for reading and careing
      but i am fine, i know you cant help but worry but i love you and i am alright!really.xoxox


  • whiterabbit.
    March 26, 2008

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    aw sweetie, I really loved this and I can relate a lot. Sometimes it's just more appealing to live fast and numb the pain. I hope you're doing okies. I love you!!!
    xx


  • dust -in-the-wind
    March 26, 2008

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    wow this was really good i really loved this poem i could read it again and again thats how good i thought it was lol i loved it great job keep up the great work
    ~brookeann~

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