Mechanical motion moved with meticulous ease,
magical with a telling and comforting smile.
Caring touched me with the feel of fenders
bending with wrapped arm and steel corset.
Ethereal wings glossed the sanctity of faith
offering tutelage without care to scoped setting.
Advanced energies were rendering, and thus,
the spirit of life became oblivious to all else.
Vision halted at the moment breath held
and patronage presented purity within logistics.
Author notes
10 Entries
10 Lines (more or less)
Image Prompt - photo courtesy of photobucket and contest holder
A contest entry
- - Wednesday Quickie to Work that Quill - by Desire.
700 points, ended March 29, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good write Pamela, interesting take on the prompt. Thanks for sharing it and congrats on the HM
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ckwriter69
Thank you so much.
I am pleased you enjoyed this piece. ~Pamela 
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Excellent
Wonderful creation for the contest. So very well done. Another well crafted poem. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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penman
Thank you. ~Pamela 
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Vision Halted
This piece tugged at Spirit and also swelled the eyes for the tale told took me there
Images unfolded through Wonderful weaving of words...
Powerful message spoken also felt from the Heart
These lines grabbed and pulled~
Ethereal wings glossed the sanctity of faith
offering tutelage without care to scoped setting.
Fantastic take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Desire
Thank you so much. For your wonderful words and an HM for this piece. ~Pamela
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Wow Amazing
Thats a mind blowing picture with an excellent poem which bled in like a mirror reflection of the picture itself. I do see a winner here. Did it win?
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Janice M Pickett
Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words so much. ~Pamela
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Yes they were
definitely the angels of mercy on the field of battle.
Interesting write and well done.
Jim
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Jim
Thank you so much. I am pleased you enjoyed this piece. ~Pamela
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My favorite part was the angel: "Magical with a telling and comforting smile"
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Sarah957
Thank you. I am pleased for your words on this piece and appreciate them so much. ~Pamela
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i like it
nice take on the promt, as an army wife this contest has a special place in my heart. i like your title and how you tied it all toghether with such beautiful words, good luck in the contest, keep writing, -Amy
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amyrowsell
Thank you for your kind words. I am pleased you enjoyed this poem. ~Pamela
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