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Mr. Guitar

Guitar's embellish my home, just waitinG
Under every bed, you know that I love yoU
I know you think it annoys me, you don't need an alibI
Taylor acoustic waiting patiently on a stand, uprighT
A Fender amp, your precious Hamer, colored blue aguA
Roni Lynn loves her man, pickin' and grinnin', Mr. GuitaR

Author notes

He's been known to pick a song or two. My guitar man for twenty five years on April 26th, 2008.
WRITTEN 3/27/2008
POETDONTKNOWIT

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 23, 2008
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    Cool! I like this acrostic a lot! Very well done indeed.


  • KayJay
    April 8, 2008
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    Very cool and personal... Good write!
    Ken


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    March 26, 2008

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    This is very unique and different for your writting!!!  It is enlightening about your guitar, the pleasure it gives to you and how much you enjoy it's music!!!!! Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!!!!


  • Neha Kaushik
    March 26, 2008

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    Hey this is amazingly done.. acrostic and that too a mirror one.. and the flow and rhythm of the poem is infallible.. thanx for sharing..