Within my heart
is a place for you,
Within my mind-
a memory of two...
This shattered glass
pierces my skin,
My tarnished soul
locks you within...
Depths of reminiscent
thoughts occur,
Leaving only a
strange gray blur...
Intrinsic webs
we do deceive,
To those we love
and those we leave...
How hard to say
those three little words,
When mockery is
all you have heard...
Try if you will
its harder than most
To live and love
life with a ghost.
A contest entry
- My 50th contest for rhyming poems... 20 poets, 790 points by Manoj Sanyal.
700 points, ended March 27, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow this is something else!
Wow this is something else! Fabulous way with words and with poetic graphics, you sure know how to pen perfection and such brilliant flow and rhyme too, this is pure poetic talent, wow, love it fabulous read and so good too, so moving and deep. Bravo, well done, love it! Write on!
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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Expressive! I'm left with my chin in my palm, tapping my index finger on my cheek. much to think about here...
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This is a beautifully sad piece of poetry full of intensity and emotion. The highs and lows of living eh
This is a great write that leaves so much to ponder!
well done and thank-you for sharing
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well expressed emotions.
Best wishes and good luck,
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