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Sunrise

Sunrise eastern Andes  peakS
Up above ancient ruins of PerU
New days tangerine glow horizoN
Ritual sun god legends all diffeR
Inca city, a stone flower origamI
Sacred place of sun spirit worldS
Echo souls sunrise garden paradisE.

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Mirrored Acrostic

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 23, 2008
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    Really like this! A wonderful write and you've done the mirrored acrostic with grace and ease.


  • Ithica silver member
    April 8, 2008
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    Very cool... Like this alot!!!


  • KayJay
    April 8, 2008

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    Wow... this is superb, Roaddog. I'd wish you luck but you don't need it... this is a winner!
    Ken


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    April 1, 2008
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    Good write


  • dustookie2
    March 26, 2008

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    Another challenge I see you have conquered HH done in your trademark of brilliance with understanding of Inca magic and magnetism...your title reflecting the sun god.
    Very nicely crafted.Good luck in the contest.

  • Lady Dragonwyck
    March 26, 2008
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    Beautiful written and a wonderful mirrored acrostic.
    I really enjoyed.

    Lady D

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