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Hit by that door

My heart has never felt like this before,
It is always flying high until it gets hit by that door once more,
He always shuts me out and never lets me in,
I mean where do I begin?,
I always throw my heart to the bin,
Hoping one day it will fly once again,
But when it starts to float it gets hit by that door once again,
And all I'm left with is a pin,
All I want to do is love and be loved just the same,
I mean am I to blame?,
For him to always shut me out and never let me in,
It never fails to be hit by that door once more.

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  • StarEyes
    January 7

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    Oh I hate that door! It does hurt! Maybe someday they will learn huh? We too have feelings! They don't get it do they?

    I love this one! and it is one that is worth many reads!


  • Zephyr Irida
    April 11, 2008
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    Well Done!

    not your best, but its cute!


  • faderman1959
    April 4, 2008

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    I can relate to this one very well! It hurts like crazy! But you get over it a move on. My thought is, if they are shutting you out why bother wanting to be in. Their loss! A very thought provoking and emotional poem young lady!


  • Sandygram
    April 1, 2008

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    This was a beautifully written poem from yhe heart but so sad. I know the feeling. I ask that question myself everyday....

    All I want to do is love and be loved just the same,
    I mean am I to blame?,

    Thank you for sharing and I do hope things work out for you. Bless you. Sandy


  • a.changed-soul.
    March 30, 2008
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    This was awesome.
    Interesting.
    Well put.

    You know,
    Jesus will
    never do that.

    He will never
    shut you out,
    or hit you
    with that door. : )

    I can do everything
    through him who
    gives me strength.
    ~ Philippians 4:13

    Great Write!

    Nicole

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