My guardian angel,
the one I dream of at night.
You're a handsome sight.
Being with you feels right.
Such joy you bring,
making my heartstrings sing;
the wind beneath my wing.
Every day is like spring.
Our path is clear.
You take away my fears
and wipe away my tears.
The guiding light you still bear.
Author notes
Heavenly Light
In a list
A contest entry
- Let's Think About Light by The Poetic Bandits.
900 points, ended April 23, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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An uplifting piece, it's nice that you chose Heavenly light and wrote of your Guardian Angel, your dreams must be very special...the rhyme is interesting with each stanza, and I like the overall romantic feel, quite engaging...thank you
~Lilac
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Interesting poem - I like the notion of love that you write about here - good luck in the contest!
Keep writing
Polly
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You have very strong hands on your faith, "being with you feels right," don't lose your guiding light, not everyone can find it. nice posting
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I think that this is very nice indeed thank you for sharign this with me goodluck in the contest much love always
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