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Sonnet to Inuyasha

The night bleeds of wind's scar
as this victim, slain.
Can this "mutt" raise the bar?
Can he stop evil's bane?

Hunting the sacred shards
leaving no foe standing.
Remaining on your guard
with no arrows landing.

From future to past
love knows not of time.
It's all been a blast
this priestess of mine.

No barrier shall stop him.
No foe to mighty.
Now hurry for time is slim.
Quest, none to lightly.

In a forest with no trees,
A spirit flying free.

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Inuyasha

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  • CrystalMoon7290
    March 26, 2008
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    I love Inuyasha to DEATH!! Great job!


  • Fourthaxis
    March 26, 2008
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    I really liked the way you started it. Good going. B'luck!