As Lunar light reflects soft muse upon earth
hues of soft tenderness frame this moment
as heartbeat of life pulse in slow, tender beats
she breathes in the harmony of a world in content.
A view of such splendour, eyes mesmerised in awe
thoughts of God's greatness in creating such grace,
like soothing lit candles creating such peace
as the finest filaments of elegance cover like lace.
Tenderly the waters ebb and flow in submission
and her thoughts have connected to her love far away,
through delicate shades devotion is charged
as two spirits entwined that will never betray.
In spiritual zephyr's moon holds their bouquet
this is their conduit of passionate murmurs,
their secret lies within luna's silent glow
for every night they'll both return for love's fervour.
In a list
A contest entry
- Lunar Beauty. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended April 1, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congratulations on your win sis.....beautiful work indeed!
Shaz xx
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As always... you have presented another beautiful and most charming piece of well written work, the beauty of this lovely creation shines through each and every stanza. A most stunning and delightful read. Wonderful penning dear sis. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Shaz xx
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie
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i love the romance that you have pened within this for there is so much beauty that captures the image. well done gran
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Wow! Is all I can say to this one. This was beautiful in all its glory. This piece just shines brightly as the moonlight itself. Best wishes to you in the contest and thank you for sharing this with me. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet.
♥ Touchof1der
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