What a thing to ask
That is a silly task
But I'm a man to bask
I'm daft!
A thing I cannot try
It's tough and I may sigh
Although I know I'll fly
I'm daft
Now how is this for you
You could say this will do
If not just say "BooHoo"
That's daft!
Author notes
12 lines without an e amongst them
A contest entry
- No E's Please! by aaaaaaaa.
460 points, ended April 2, 2008, 13 entries
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haha great work. I really loved the second stanza. And the last line reminded me of Paris Hilton's "that's hot" and I cringed, but your version is superb! haha. Good luck in the contest.
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Pleased to say I don't think I've ever heard any such thing as !Paris Hilton's "that's hot""!
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Well done! It's not easy is it, especially trying to make sense as well, but you've done a good job Good luck in the contest..
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This is a riot! Very good, you're just daft enought to take this challenge aren't you?
Love,
Amera♥
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didn't the shamen say 'e's are good' not that I would know being a bad wild child. Certainly not an eesy task when its the most common letter of this fine language of ours. Thanks for giggle before I start work hun. xxx
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Theres an e in the last little bit, may want to change that before the judge sees lol.. Not an easy feat though. Good job.
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Fixed thanks!
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DAMN YOU, ADDAMS!
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