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(Contest) The Metal Touch

Cold metal clamps of gold
Tight on nipples anticipating
Overwhelmed
In Arousing Agony

Author notes

Nipple clamps restrict circulation. The sensations from them change, from agony at first to tingling, and even worse pain, or sometimes numbness. but if theyre tight enoguh, the clamps being released hurt more than them being on, as the blood rushes back to the nipples. For a masochist, they're a lot of fun, and I imidiatly thought of them when I saw the prompt restricted circulation, because thats a huge part of how they work.

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  • ukelova
    March 26, 2008

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    Yay

    Hello there.

    Congratulations on your gold Cup Award.

    Your author's Notes were quite educational, so thanks for sharing this information. I;'mnot sure my gf would like to try this though, and i sure wouldn't like to try it as my nipplers are much too sensitive.

    Have a loose, relaxing day,
    BJ.

    • abba12
      March 26, 2008

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      lol, everyones are sensitive, thats the point. most people wouldnt enjoy it, but masochists can, which is what i am. you should give it a go sometime lol


      • ukelova
        March 26, 2008
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        sensitive

        NO way - I'm a wimp - i don't like pain.

        • abba12
          March 26, 2008
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          lol, then you're certainly not a masochist
          wiiimp


          • ukelova
            March 26, 2008
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            wiimp

            LOL

            • abba12
              March 26, 2008
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              I should get out my whip, you might like that one lol


              • ukelova
                March 26, 2008
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                whip

                I enjoy being whipped - but only by hair. (!)

                • abba12
                  March 26, 2008
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                  haha, experiment a little more!


                  • ukelova
                    March 26, 2008
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                    experiment

                    Ok, the next time my gf whips me with her hair, i'll ask her to include a ribbon.


  • Kari gold member
    March 26, 2008

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    This was awesome! lol. I really liked this piece and like she said this one took me off guard but in a good way! lol


  • DeadlyPoetic88
    March 26, 2008

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    Ha! This actually caught me way off guard when I first read it... I have a friend who talks about those things all of the time... he's obsessed with them. lol. I think that it worked well with the prompt... but interesting that it was the first thing that you thought of when you saw this prompt... is that always on your mind? lol
    Well... aside from me being taken aback from your theme within the poem. I thought that it worked well with the prompt. Good luck in the contest.

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