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Angel

I’m burning in the depths of hell
A tale of fear and darkness to tell
The flames are scorching my being
Ashes left and an unhappy ending

Gazing upon the inferno, finding my angel
Hearing that there aren’t any angels in hell
My hopes of freedom has suddenly faded
Holding on a thread, wishing they had lied

Build beads of life from my pales of blood
Make drops of water from my blocks of mud
Tell me what it takes to rise from my misery
Be on your way my angel, rescue me

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    March 26, 2008
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    Thank you for participation.


  • Manoj Sanyal
    March 26, 2008
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    Dear participant.
    Can you make the poem of 20 lines as per contest requirement?
    Thank you.