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The Promise

Love
A glance,
A touch,
A whisper,
A kiss
Together arm in arm,
when life was effortless.



Dried flowers lay
beside an empty vase.
Dust collecting
on the letters you wrote me.
Slowly the chaos of life
pulling further away the
affirmations contained within.

Longing dripping like ink.



"Wait for me....."

I waited.

An open embrace, anticipating
a journeys end, left unrequited.



We have traveled far
from that moment when time stopped,

Love.
A bond not lost,
just frozen into
sepia toned memories.

Author notes

Prompt #1 There is love burning to find you;; will you wait for me?"



Not quite sure if this falls under the prompt but this is what came out of me.

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  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    April 30, 2008

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    I like this, especially the inclusion of sepia toned memories. Brings home the beauty of capturing images of old. well done.