Love is what this isn't,
when you have me in your arms,
telling me I'm worthless.
It isn't so, says true love to the imposter.
You ruin my name with cheap perfume and porno flicks,
with red roses and evening sex.
Indeed, love is not this.
A contest entry
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475 points, ended June 3, 48 entries
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Comments
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How true that statment is! Very well written and straight to the point! Best of luck in the contest!
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you could not have made your point any better. This write speaks pure truth. It really is sad some think that those things are actualy love. How lost they are. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter my contest good luck and it is much appreciated
huggles
Lena -
That's right, it isn't. Well written. Blessings.
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Mmmm once again you speak of love..what it is and isnt. Interesting words here. Well done
Warmest,
Mylee -
NO LOVE IS NOT THAT
AND YOU SAID IT WELL -
i know that feeling i've been there
people try to pressure other people into doning things they don't want to do and say that they will love you if you do it well tought luck i'm strong lol
great write keep it up
tori
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yeah, it does suck. i wish people wouldn't ruin love so much. 'tis crazy.
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Ughhh don't you hate that though. love is such a special thing to have. some people just flat out spoil it. Great write
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