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The pen of the Liar

LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR
For twenty fucking years this is what I thought
A crime never committed, a decpetion and plot
They said I was a reformed man coming out
Praise the lord Is what I should shout
But it was with this paper I was sent away
Not knowing who the hell it was going to sway
Not Judge nor Jury can stop me now
For the Liers pen will stop for I got the means on how
LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR
That word echoing in my head day after day
LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR
I will tell the whole fucking world my way
LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR
Where all Buffers and signals lose strength and control
LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR
To bust the ink well and burn the doctrine whole
LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR
You sent me away wrongfully, now its your turn
LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR
To have you wings clipped and your freedom burn
LIAR LIAR LIAR it amuses me
LIAR LIAR LIAR how blind you must be
To think that 20 years made me forget
Ever trusting you, thats my main regret
LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR
Soon you will all see,
What happens to those who double cross me
I am filth I know its true
But what you did means I am higher then you
LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR
I hope you lose this battle and the whole game
Cause Victory is sweeter when you lose in shame
LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR
Soon the world will know what you did
The truth will be told and that is my final bid

Author notes

These are lyrics from a story I am writing called Farron, You can see the whole tale thus far on my page@ Storywrite.com/Tarkus_Trilogy

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  • AnnaelyseNotte
    May 8, 2008
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    Wow Brother! Thats good!


  • FunnelWaxFate
    April 1, 2008

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    Oh, this is excellent! I'd have to say, my absolute favorite lines are these, "To have you wings clipped and your freedom burn
    LIAR LIAR LIAR it amuses me
    LIAR LIAR LIAR how blind you must be
    To think that 20 years made me forget
    Ever trusting you, thats my main regret
    LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR
    Soon you will all see,
    What happens to those who double cross me
    I am filth I know its true
    But what you did means I am higher then you" such an invigorating write! Quite intense. The depth is immense. Very wonderful write, especially in its healing power and logical truth that shines through the turmoil of swirling emotion...when one wishes to droop and feels like swill after such deception and wronging, this piece is extremely uplifting and reveals the truth so often obscured. Excellent, amazing write!!!!

  • aaaaaaaa
    March 26, 2008

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    You might want to spell it 'liar' instead of 'lier'... I only bring it up because you use the word a billion times and it's kinda distracting to see the wrong word every other line. but good write besides that, a lot of emotion!