Spinning Inside Her Like The Stars,
I Hope You Think Of Me
When You Feel Her Heart Beat,
And How I Gave You What You Wanted.
Don’t Forget The Kiss You Gave,
Sweetened With The Fake Romance,
Bitter Now Inside My Mouth,
I Hope She Tastes That.
You Can’t Tell Her Why,
But You Can’t Stomach Another Cut,
By The Sharpened Knife That I Was,
Im Your Own Personal Ghost
You Loved Me Like You Knew,
You Kissed Me Like You Cared,
Forget That Stellar Summer Morning,
And Move Past Our Saturday Afternoon.
Accept The Medicine And Swallow Your Cure,
You Will Always Remember This,
My Lips Will Always Be Softer Than Hers
You Cant Deny The Sea It’s Water.
So Kill yourself Trying To Forget,
While I Dance Like A Harlot In Your Head,
Blood Red Lips And Scarlet Curves,
Burned Inside Your Eyes.
Im Not Any Different,
But You Hear The Inaudible Music,
And It’s Killing You Slowly,
Soon It Will Kill Her Too.
Don't You Regret Me Now?
I Laugh At Your Infinite Pain, (Ha Ha Ha)
You Are Another Mark On The Wall,
Next To The Cutting And The Fake Smiles.
Good Luck Finding Love,
Without Your Whole Heart,
I've Got The Pieces In The Palm Of My Hand,
Bleeding To The Beat Of Your Sorrow Story.
Author notes
this isn't really my story exactly, the emotion is drawn from what i have experienced. the actual story is taken from a friend of mine (who has read this poem and said this was ok w/ her). so yeah.
A contest entry
- Give me any kind of love you want by ApocalypseAngel.
450 points, ended June 27, 2008, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What Did You Like About This? What Didn't You Like? Can You Relate At All?
Comments
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Great job writing someone else's story
Bitter Now Inside My Mouth,
I Hope She Tastes That.
I like it.
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wowww
I truly loved this poem! It was tragically beautiful and really spoke to me a lot...the imagery was incredible and intense. I admire how you were able to write your feelings out like this with such concrete imagery. It brought so much power to the poem.
Thanks for the kind comment on mine!
Keep up the awesome work
<3
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