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overdriven descriptions: first attempt

topic: renewal

that lush and vibrant flower that's slowly blooming deep within you
bringing out now the burning and primal innocence that comes with
rebirth and the cleansing of the entity, expelling the dank old
gray mold, making room for sprouts of those glorious flowers
which unfurl steadily deep inside, gathering moist drops of
sweat and blood as the two pure substances mix in a fusion
of effulgent and ripe secretions from thats same self
which is bursting forth with the lavish buds of new
change, the evolution of these succulent tendrils
brings forth the long ignored desire for nurture
and care from the overflowing well of euphoric
contentment and compassion, which fuels the
blossoms fully into bloom, and the energy
of that explosive reticence, the clear
cut willingness to present the near
naked and yet confident sprouts
of a new expanding conscious
out into the rest of that
reality which you know
may begin to unfold
out in front of you
now that you know
that this is
real enough
to really
feel the
truth of
it now
don't
you

you can call me crazy but tell me why you think so.....

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  • Short but cute
    April 2, 2008
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    THIS IS SO KICKASS! You have a lot of talent. I love it!