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Hoody Don't Show The Steal



All black Hoody,
Concealing chrome heat,
Down for whatever tonight.

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10 words
Prompt ~ Jacket

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  • redteacup
    April 1, 2008

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    Intersting. I wonder why Hoody is capitalized. Intriguing.

    And I like the casualness of the last line, and how it leaves you hanging.

    Nice image and emotion portrayed in so few words.

    Good luck in the contest.


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    March 28, 2008
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    Good write


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 25, 2008
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    Deeply creative and grasping... x