Relief washes over
Extinguishing stress.
Longing for freedom,
All it takes is a breath.
Xylophones, windchimes, guitar...
Any sound you wish, can drench you in calm.
Take these words, and know them for truth;
I guarantee the key to freedom lies in your palm.
Only you can show yourself how to live...
Now relax, go and take what we have to give:
refreshing, encompassing rhymes...
Author notes
wrong wrong so bad workin on it
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
600 points, ended April 14, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Enjoi!!
Comments
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Mmmmm sounds soo nice and inspirational lol
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Ah, now that's a refreshing read. Gives me that wonderful feeling of kicking off my shoes or taking a long bath.
Síochán leat
~Mairéad~
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A wonderfully written acrostic. I think you did a brilliant job writing this. I hope you do well in the contest.
Kelli
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