he kissed my nose
whispering:
“as cute as a bunny’s”
little did i know
that he humped
like a jackrabbit
leaving
that white tail
inside
my burrow.
and his prints
across this
snowy plain.
Author notes
Comment/critque!
peace to all ~flight
A contest entry
- Prompt 16 entries 20 line or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended March 30, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
honesty
Comments
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LOL...this one still makes me smile...great metaphor and comparison...lies leave us in the dust of life...wonderful work...
thank you for entering! -
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ahha, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the bronze!
peace to all ~flight
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