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The Snow

So I'll just wait here,
Here in the cold cold snow,
While I cry and I call,
I call your name,
And I try to remember.

What can I say?
These words seem so meek,
So blank so pointless.

I can't heal a friendship,
Not the way you've torn it up.

I can't heal a person,
The best I can do is hope,
And hope alone just from me,
Can't heal your scars.
(Any one of you!)

I can't heal my heart,
I can't heal the hearts that I've broken,
Not after all that I've screwed up,

All I can do is hope,
The rest is up to you,
All of you,
And until you realize that,
I'll just wait here,
Here in the cold, cold, snow.

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  • alyssaxo
    March 26, 2008

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    well-structured

    this was really amazing. i enjoyed reading it very much and it really made me say wow. :] great write, keep it up. this is well structured, youve got quite a talent; as im sure youve heard a million times before!


  • Kelli Marie
    March 25, 2008

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    A very nicely written piece of poetry. Nice imagery. I can see someone standing in the cold snow, waiting for love.
    Kelli