Knowing you will hold me down
While the grind keeps me at bay
My boo keeps the drama around
Still lovin me in every way
still ridin out dirty as fuck
My PO checks my every move
Never knowing whats really up
Whispering that shit to you so smooth
Ma you keep me twisted in every way
These words of love never leaves my lips
You know my heart and what to say
As I caress your luscious full size hips
Hold me down ma
Author notes
Just playing - couple of brews told me to
A contest entry
- Loving your Boo by Ms Sexy.
450 points, ended March 26, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent
This is an excellent write, you showed that you can write anything with this, and you sure showed the ghettoe sweet lyrics of the inner city, I have so many cousins and uncles that still think this way, some of them never grow how out of it, all they have their street smarts, great write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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I Know YOU are Playing.............
Well I like how you went into your bag of tricks, and pull out a show stopper. I had to keep telling myself this is for the contest..but you revealed the thug. Just a peek into a life you so long ago parted. Its just wonderful when we can pull from reality & imagery.............Your talent amazed me once again...
Ma
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LOL
you a mess 
I loved that ride...u know I would
Tha Brews, huh?
Ok...then
CoCo...sizzlin hot with this HOOD style
Im always HOT for you
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you kept it hood for me. Thanks for entering
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