to my knees i fall
and i see all
to truth it does not lie
were is home
for all i roam
on wings to sky i fly
when is the end
and life i lend
come back to this wandering soul
to become soon
the light of moon
and reach my remaining goal
when i see candle light
a shine, a sight vivid and bright
makes me want fredom more
as waves flow in
patients run thin
as i float off the shore
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Interesting rhyme scheme; I liked it. Interesting concept as well. It's very different. Excellent work my friend.


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wow i like itg nice


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i like it... its different than other things i've read from you for some reason. I'm not usually into rhyming but i think the rhyming scheme works really well here.



