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the truth i see

to my knees i fall
and i see all
to truth it does not lie

were is home
for all i roam
on wings to sky i fly

when is the end
and life i lend
come back to this wandering soul

to become soon
the light of moon
and reach my remaining goal

when i see candle light
a shine, a sight vivid and bright
makes me want fredom more

as waves flow in
patients run thin
as i float off the shore












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  • Simply Simple
    June 8, 2008

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    Interesting rhyme scheme; I liked it. Interesting concept as well. It's very different. Excellent work my friend.


  • xXgabbybearXx
    March 26, 2008
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    wow i like itg nice


  • StarLightResurrects
    March 25, 2008

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    i like it... its different than other things i've read from you for some reason. I'm not usually into rhyming but i think the rhyming scheme works really well here.