Ask no questions and I'll tell no lies
Speak only statements to learn the secrets I hide
There are other ways around asking questions, you see
All you have to do is speak plainly and truthful to me
You want the truth then say whats really bothering you
Don't hide your deep thoughts if you seek the truth
I don't ask that you do this so we can become closer
I demand you do this so you can find your answers
No I will not ask you no questions that resonate deep inside
And for that I hope you know not to ask your questions if your wish no lies
Author notes
Ask no questions I will tell you no lies
A contest entry
- Questions or Lies by Maili Knephthan.
1000 points, ended April 2, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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First of all let me thank you for entering the contest secondly let me say think you for reading the rules and now to the poem it is very well written and I really like it.. You did a good job with the prompt.
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Well thanks for holding the contest...I really did like the prompt...I guess it sort of touched a deeper level.
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Your first line is cliche, but the rest is all yours. Very well written. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Oh I understand the first line is cliche but that's the prompt so...I used it...but thanks for the comment!
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