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Solitude

Such a lonely life
I’ve created
Locked doors
Keep everyone out
Withdrawal from life
By sheer need
Never felt so isolated
Needing solitude
Protecting me
I’m not sure why
Or how to stop
It’s not a choice
It’s a need
Let me hide
Let me disappear
It won’t be long
This butterfly
Will re-emerge
In my own time
But for now…
I need
Solitude



Author notes

option 7:
how your feeling right now, or this week/day

"jungle fever"



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  • Liquid memories
    April 2, 2008

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    yes, that being alone is great time to refresh and decide next move, best for you. solitude an opportunity review life, choosiong next move or meditate. well done.

  • Mom of Blondes
    March 26, 2008

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    This is really good. You described very clearly, in an easy to relate to way, how you are feeling. I really like the wording and the short lines. Good job!


  • brokenangel13
    March 26, 2008
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    Im feeling like this now. Thank you.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    March 25, 2008

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    Sometimes a good rest is what one really needs. Just a period for quiet reflection and heeling. Nice job.