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Opposites

He sat at the computer to play yet another fantasy based game.
He talked the whole time, not really caring who was listening.

She sat alone in her room reading, trying to escape to a fantasy.
She talks only when she needs to, and caring about who is listening.

He sits at the lunch table with all his friends, laughing about his latest joke.
He gets just passing grades in school, knowing he could do better.

She sits alone at the lunch table, praying no one notices her.
She gets A's and B's, and not daring to do worse.

He finds every cheat available in every game he plays.
He rides his bicycle to work everyday.

She plays a game without cheats, she wants to know she can do it herself.
She drives a car to work everyday.

He is told he is a geek.
He is called names by those he loves.

She is told she is beautiful, but she dares not believe.
She is called hot, but never to her face.

They met at work one day, and just like opposites attract, they do.
He thinks she is more beautiful than a moonlit garden.
She thinks he is handsome beyond compare.

He says she can do better than he.
She says no one could ever do better.

He is the sunlight after a long drought in her life.
She is his starlight sky, after a dark and lonely road.

 

Like night and day they came together, and created something beautiful, a sunrise and a sunset. 

The colors of their lives blended to make a landscape that never stops changing.

 

She once so shy and timid found someone who never stops talking and who has never been shy a day in his life.

 She loves him with her whole heart, and he in return loves her.

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  • lilblueeyesmine1978
    May 20, 2008
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    This is good Angel. It is just hard for me to beliwve that someone who could write so sweetly about a man one month could go and lie and treat him like crap the next. You may have people fooled right now about your lies but everyone has figured you out after a short time. And when these people figure out that you are lying about everything then you will be in big trouble too. Can you say false charges? As long as you treat your husband this way then nop one in this family wishes to speak to you again. Don't write. don't call.


  • scream.n2.nite
    March 25, 2008
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    daring

    Wow, thank you for this write!! Another creative piece! I loved reading the lines, but then I feel as if maybe you cut the work short in some way... I feel that you could definately add more to this write if you cared to!! If you do, I'd love to read it!! This piece had great potential!! Thank you for entering my contest! ^_^

    - - riah - -